hungrylewd's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ashley teacher]

Very nice work (I LOVE futanari pieces and you executed what I like about it nicely). The linework is a little bit strange in some places however. Of course, nobody is perfect. I personally try to get my lines as consistent amd smooth as possible, or to the best of my abilities. The first color-palate has a very nice contrast in colors, and the last one is nice to look at, but there's just one thing about it. The shade of purple and black are a bit too close, and can make it difficult to see the difference between color. Other than that, there isn't much else to other than great job.

onkenyo responds:

I love this kind of feedback, it's sometimes hard to tell if things that I'm seeing are seen by others, and it always helps for others to point out things maybe I'm not seeing! Thank you so much for taking the time!

[Another One Bites Za Dusto Redux]

Very nice, but one thing that I would suggest is cleaning up the linework, unless it is meant to be that way. It could be to simulate pen pressure in some areas, but I don't know. Other than than that, the colors are pleasant, the form is consistent and the aesthetic of Kira Queen is very nice. Keep up the good work!

Wriizzy responds:

Thank you! And yeah I was going for a heavy rough look with the lineart